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 # What is [GitLab](https://about.gitlab.com)
-- Git repository management, task tracking, milestones, activity feeds, teams, and WIKIS!
+- Git repository management, task tracking, milestones, activity feeds, teams, and wikis!
 - Open Source
-- Very actively maintained
+- Actively maintained by many open-source contributors
 - Why not use GitHub or Bitbucket?
  - They don't provide private repositories for large teams (unless you pay a lot!)
 
@@ -9,25 +9,25 @@
 - Go to https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu
 - Click on the Google 'G' logo and sign in using your Google credentials
 - Peter will unblock you
-- (Activity: Peter unblocks all new users in the session) 
 
-# What are all of these options?
+# What are all of these sections on the left?
 - Projects
- - Each project is a Git repository 
+ - Each project has its own Git repository
 - Activity Stream
+ - Get an up-to-date view of recent activity on the project
 - Groups
- - Members of a group become default members of each group project
+ - Members of a group become default members of each project kept in the group page
 - Privacy settings
  - Private: Project access must be granted explicitly for each user.
  - Internal: The project can be cloned by any logged in user. (DEFAULT) 
  - Public: The project can be cloned without any authentication.
-- [Permissions](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help/permissions/permissions)
+- [Types of User Permissions](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help/permissions/permissions)
 
 # What is [Git](http://www.git-scm.com)
 - [Git cheatsheet](https://training.github.com/kit/downloads/github-git-cheat-sheet.pdf)
 - Why git?
  - [Compared to SVN](https://git.wiki.kernel.org/index.php/GitSvnComparsion): faster, smaller repositories, better merging, better branching, distributed (offline access, full local copy of the repo)
-- Typical workflow
+- Typical workflow for making changes
  - `git pull`
  - `git add`
  - `git commit -a`
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 - GUIs
  - [Github Desktop](https://desktop.github.com)
  - [Sourcetree](https://www.sourcetreeapp.com)
-- (Activity: Add your ssh key to your profile)
+- (Activity: Add your ssh key to your GitLab profile)
 
 ![588px-Git_operations.svg](/uploads/fd90a0a434b41b9a2f7289412e619fa8/588px-Git_operations.svg.png)
 
-# Demo
-- HACMS Test Project: https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/hacms/hacms-test
-`git clone git@gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu:hacms/hacms-test.git
-cd hacms-test
-touch <NEW FILE>
-git add <NEW FILE>
-git commit -m "<YOUR COMMIT MESSAGE HERE>"
-git push`
-
 # Wiki editing
-- [Markdown syntax](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help/markdown/markdown)
+- [Syntax](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help/markdown/markdown)
 - Make new pages: `[Title](page-name)`
-- Drag-and-drop files to attach (DEMO: Add an image to a wiki)
+- Drag-and-drop files to attach
 
 # Projects
 - Based around a git repo
-- Namespaces
-- Members and roles
+- Assign individual members and roles/permissions
 - [User permission levels](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help/permissions/permissions)
-- Privacy levels
+- Privacy levels for sharing code internally or publicly
 
 # Groups
 - When to use one?
- - When you know that all members may be working on a set of shared projects
+ - When you know that all members will be working on a set of shared projects
 
 # Issues and Milestones
 - What are they for?
- - Assign tasks/issues to an assignee with a specified date/milestone
+ - Assign tasks/issues to a person and specify a deadline
 - When to use them?
- - Use them for keeping track of tasks, keeping track of bugs to be fixed, assigning tasks to a milestone date for tracking progress
-
-## Command line instructions
-
-### Git global setup
-
-`git config --global user.name "Peter Gebhard"
-git config --global user.email "pgeb@seas.upenn.edu"`
+ - Use them for keeping track of tasks, keeping track of bugs to be fixed, assigning tasks to a deadline date for tracking progress
 
-### Create a new repository
+### Git setup on the command line (one-time action)
 
-`git clone git@gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu:hacms/hacms-test.git
-cd hacms-test
-touch README.md
-git add README.md
-git commit -m "add README"
-git push -u origin master`
+`git config --global user.name "YOUR NAME HERE"
+git config --global user.email "YOUR EMAIL HERE"`
 
 # More GitLab documentation
-- [HELP!](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help)
+- [HELP](https://gitlab.precise.seas.upenn.edu/help)
 - [GitLab README](http://doc.gitlab.com/ce/gitlab-basics/README.html)